another drawing of mine with a little bit of editing. click on the picture to open in a new window. plz. comment.

rain, rain, lovely rain

today it rained and it rained a lot.
just wanted to go outside.
at home i used to, but then i used to fell ill.
and then got scolded.
now i don't do that.
watched it for some time from the window.
and the breeze was really soothing n refreshing.
i loved it soooooooooooo much.

this is a drawing of mine, with a little bit of editing.
please comment abt. it.
thanks in advance.